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PostSubject: Re: How's this?   Wed Jun 24, 2009 10:40 am

Well we came up with it at recess...
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PostSubject: Re: How's this?   Wed Jun 24, 2009 10:35 pm

Besides, i haven't even finished yet!!!! The next part i'm still working on! Anyway, something unexpected happens at the end, that's why so many of you need to HOLD YOUR COMMENTS!
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PostSubject: Re: How's this?   Wed Jun 24, 2009 10:39 pm

We can still comment on the parts already done.
There's absolutely nothing wrong with that.
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PostSubject: Re: How's this?   Wed Jun 24, 2009 10:42 pm

I know. I said nothing against you.
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PostSubject: Re: How's this?   Thu Jun 25, 2009 6:10 am

Calm down. If we were supposed to hold comments, you should have made it clear when you started.

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PostSubject: Re: How's this?   Fri Jun 26, 2009 12:05 am

-.- Here's the next part, it's not that big cause i am getting tired of making these things:

The Sealed Rock


Cain: Grahh!!! *rock cracks* Hrahh!!!! *rock shatters*

Vain: hehehe!!!

Cain: Let's get outta here.

The Team Chaos Base

Orbit: You sealed em in a rock? That's so 80's.....

Comet: OOOOKKKK??

Sceinic:Well at least they-

*base rumbles and the door crahes open to reveal....*

Cain: Hehehehehe!!!!!

Comet: gahh! You! How'd you escape that quick???

Vain: You sealed us tight, but not tight enough!

Comet: I've decided. *darkness shrouds around eyes* IT ENDS HERE!!!

Cain: then let's do it!

Sceinic: Alright! Let's do this!

Comet: Orbit, get to safety!

Orbit: No! I wanna help!

Comet: Then be careful! *runs up and kicks Cain* Hrahh!! *punches him in the face*

Sceinic: Hyahh!!!! *tries to kick Vain, but he grabs her instead, then he slings her around a slings her up against a wall*

Comet: Sceinic, you ok?

Sceinic: Yep!!!

Comet: good! Sceinic, Orbit,Get a safe distance from here!

Sceinic: Why?

Orbit: Hmm???

Comet: Just do it!!

Sceinic and Orbit: OK! *runs 100 yards away*

Comet: hrrrrrraaaaahahhhhhhhhh!!!!!!! * a large blast exerts from Comet's hand, striking Cain and Vain*

Cain: Grrr!! Counter!!! *The blast is turned around and hits Comet instead*

Comet: GRahhhhh!!!! Hmmm........

Sceinic: *runs back* Whats wrong?

Comet: We can't do this alone....

Orbit: Whaddaya mean?

Comet:It means we need help!!!

TO BE CONTINUED!
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PostSubject: Re: How's this?   Fri Jun 26, 2009 3:12 am

Hehe, I bet this is where our bros come in
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PostSubject: Re: How's this?   Fri Jun 26, 2009 3:25 am

not bad. i dont mak these cause no one looks at em. XD

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PostSubject: Re: How's this?   Tue Jun 30, 2009 11:24 pm

Sceinic, you're right!! They'll be here soon, but i'm still workin on it....
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PostSubject: Re: How's this?   Wed Jul 22, 2009 10:28 pm

Sorry for da late return, but here it is!:

Comet: Hiyaa!!!! *kicks Cain and Vain away* Let's see here...... *punches in something on his watch, and in an instant Wasp and James appear* Hehe! Nice to see ya again bro!

Wasp: Same Here!

Sceinic: Heya James!

James: Hey sis!

Comet: *Looks at the charging Cain and Vain* We'd better get ready!

Sceinic: Yeah!

Wasp: Then lets do it......

James: All right.

Comet: *Runs up and kicks Cain in the stomach* take that !

James: Take this! *punches Vain*

Wasp: Comet, should we?

Comet: Let's do it!

Comet and Wasp: *Grab hands and charge energy* Huyaaaa!!!!! *a large Superpower ball is thrown at Cain and Vain, Striking them*

Sceinic: Hyaaa! *throws a power mblast at Vain*

Comet: I'll finish this! Everybody get as far away as possible!

Orbit: Dawww....i didn't get to attack!

Comet: *glares at Orbit*

Orbit: sorry....

Sceinic: Okay! *all but Comet teleport away*

Comet: You've done enough...... now it ends......

TO BE CONTINUED......
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PostSubject: Re: How's this?   Thu Jul 23, 2009 2:32 am

ZZZ...ZZZ...
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PostSubject: Re: How's this?   Thu Jul 23, 2009 2:37 am

my point exactly

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PostSubject: Re: How's this?   Fri Jul 31, 2009 11:41 pm

*glares* That doesn't help...... Furious
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PostSubject: Re: How's this?   Sat Aug 01, 2009 12:55 am

Look you two. Atleast Kapus and I GAVE constructive criticism. If you're gonna be like that, don't bother him.

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PostSubject: Re: How's this?   Mon Aug 17, 2009 3:51 am

Smash is right, it doesn't help to criticize comet, unless it's the constructive kind. But comet
does need to work on that anger problem. No offense, Comet.
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PostSubject: Re: How's this?   Tue Aug 18, 2009 10:44 am

Sceinic wrote:
Smash is right, it doesn't help to criticize comet, unless it's the constructive kind. But comet
does need to work on that anger problem. No offense, Comet.
Uh why did you revive this topic? COmet doesn't even come here anymore.

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PostSubject: Re: How's this?   Tue Aug 18, 2009 11:32 am

Nope, not really.
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PostSubject: Re: How's this?   Tue Aug 18, 2009 7:33 pm

I'm gonna get him to, he's at my school.
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PostSubject: Re: How's this?   Sat Aug 29, 2009 5:08 am

u Failed.

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PostSubject: Re: How's this?   Sat Aug 29, 2009 6:19 am

What did I tell you? If you don't have anything constructive to say that would help, don't bother them.

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PostSubject: Re: How's this?   Sat Aug 29, 2009 7:44 am

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What did I tell you? If you don't have anything constructive to say that would help, don't bother them.
listen to yourself. you're telling SL to be constructive.

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PostSubject: Re: How's this?   Sat Aug 29, 2009 8:12 am

Someone's got to tell him. If he's not going to do that, then he should just leave them alone.

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