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PostSubject: Re: Fancharacters   Sun May 02, 2010 10:27 pm

Flare the Hedgehog


Okay guys, gotta tell you the bio for my character's rival. First, his name is Flare and he grew up training when he was younger. He is 16 and his birthday is on August 10, 1993. He has white fur. I'm still working on how he looks. Flare's theme is I Came To Play by Downstait. He doesn't have many friends, just allies that will help him to get what he wants. One is Brocko the Cat who is always by Flare's side. Flare mainly thinks for himself and he doesn't care who gets in his way. Flare and Rhys first meet when they both were walking in a field known as Rapture Field. They saw each other and fought to see who was better. Both of them would match each others moves and Flare decided to leave to train more. Ever since that day, Flare and Rhys have been rivals. Flare has a keyblade know as Poison and he learns to use its amazing abilities. Flare has also had many battles with Rhys and when they both use their keyblades. Flare has two super forms, one is Super Flare, and the other is Nightmare. Nightmare is his Heartless form that learns when he absorbs enough power from the Heartless and his keyblade. Nightmare gives him the power to bring darkness to wherever he goes and it is similar to Rhys' Lightspine form. That's all of Flare's bio so far. I'll edit it if I come up with anything else.

Here's the link for Flare's theme I Came To Play: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fiSsqy3OEno&feature=related

This is what Flare looks like: http://illiweb.com/fa/pbucket.gif
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PostSubject: Re: Fancharacters   Sun May 02, 2010 10:53 pm

So...they were just walking in a field and met each other and then just randomly started fighting? How odd.
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PostSubject: Re: Fancharacters   Sun May 02, 2010 11:01 pm

What on earth is that guy doing with a keyblade?
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PostSubject: Re: Fancharacters   Sun May 02, 2010 11:02 pm

Oh, yeah, that was another thing I should have asked.
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PostSubject: Re: Fancharacters   Sun May 02, 2010 11:05 pm

Is he a keyblade master?
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PostSubject: Re: Fancharacters   Sun May 02, 2010 11:38 pm

SonicFanPS2 wrote:
Is he a keyblade master?

No, I'm still working on his bio and I thought it would be good to give him a keyblade since my character has one. I'll edit it when I have his bio finished.
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PostSubject: Re: Fancharacters   Sun May 02, 2010 11:40 pm

So, why does your character have one? No offense, but this seems pretty slapped together without much thought/reason.
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PostSubject: Re: Fancharacters   Sun May 02, 2010 11:42 pm

Speedy the Hedgehog wrote:
So, why does your character have one? No offense, but this seems pretty slapped together without much thought/reason.

For my story.
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PostSubject: Re: Fancharacters   Sun May 02, 2010 11:44 pm

..That doesn't explain much. Was he chosen by the Keyblade or something?
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PostSubject: Re: Fancharacters   Mon May 03, 2010 12:31 am

Speedy the Hedgehog wrote:
..That doesn't explain much. Was he chosen by the Keyblade or something?

Actually yes, I forgot to put that in his bio. I'll edit his bio when I have it fully finished.
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PostSubject: Re: Fancharacters   Tue May 04, 2010 9:58 pm

Kapus wrote:
Huski wrote:
If I made any serious, full-on constructive criticism or even give my full opinion on that character I will probably be considered a troll/meanie/flamer/hater and consequently banned from SW before you can say "unoriginal".

So I'll ask this instead:
Why does the headband go ON his eyes like that?

I actually think your post would be rather praised instead of frowned upon, given our audience.

But yes, that headband thing bothered me.

Well if you say that, can I give my full opinion on him? I find saying "u suk" and that being the end of it pointless personally.

...and I am still afraid my 'review' would be offensive to him.
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PostSubject: Re: Fancharacters   Wed May 05, 2010 12:03 am

Go ahead if you want. I'm pretty sure any character maker would like feedback.
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PostSubject: Re: Fancharacters   Tue Jul 06, 2010 6:09 am

I'm just going to talk about my main fancharacter, Cindy The Hedgehog.



Name: Cindy
Nickname: Cin, Cind
Age: Unknown (15)
Gender: Female
Race: Hedgehog
Eye-colour: Deep-Purple
Element: Light
Likes: Watching sun rise/set, friends, going on adventure
Dislikes: devoting time on slaying heartless
Abilities: She's able to summon the Keyblade and fight hearltess with it.
Story:
Note, Cindy's storyline started about 600 years in the past.
Cindy's parents Lillian and Julian had to flee from Ancient Mobotropolis. The Great War, between the citizens of Mobotropolis and Port Angel (which is now Ancient Ruins btw) led to total destruction of the cities.
The echidnas from Port Angel were the protectors of Angel island, and Angel island was the keeping place for the Chaos Emeralds. The Mobians were anxious to get the Chaos Emeralds because they would give the city enough power to battle it's invading enemies and stuff.
The Echidna's protected the Emeralds, so no-one could misuse them,
They learned from their mistakes when Chaos appeared from the Master Emerald, just 50 years ago.
Cindy father Julian and mother Lillian (who was pregnant at that time) fled to The Great Forest in the hope they would survive the massacre.
The Great Forest is practicly between the Nations at war, so it was also some kind of battleground.
1 year later, when Cindy was born for just a few months, the soldiers found them. Cindy's parents ran away and tried to hide in a cave.
That cave was the home of an Oracle, named Delmos.
Cindy's parents asked the Oracle if he could take care of Cindy.
The Oracle asked why they asked him to, Cindy's parents told him the soldiers of both nations were engaged in battle in the Great Forest and that they would eventually find them, and kill them.
The Oracle took Cindy and protected her during the war.
Cindy's parents both died in the Great Forst while searching for food,
The Enemy troops thought they were Mobian spies.
When Cindy turned 12, the war was over, the cities were rebuilding. Mobotropolis apologized for trying to get the Chaos Emeralds, and agreed to peace.
She left the cave in search for her parents, who never came back to the cave.
She searched the land, over and over again, for three years, but never found a single trace of them.
She returned to the oracle cave to ask him for advice, but when she got there, the Oracle was gone.
The only thing in the entire cave was a tiara.
There was a note attached to it:
"Cindy, I know I never could bring your parents back even though I want to..
But there's a greater thread than we thought. A door has opened.
Take this Tiara of Time, it will grant you an everlasting-life for as long as you wear it."
She took the Tiara, and looked for clues on this 'door' that had opened.
One night, a storm took place above the Ancient ruins (which had been deserted after The Great War).
The only one around, was Cindy.
The storm got worse, a hurricane appeared, but it was surely not a normal hurricane.
When it got close to Cindy it just vanished.
black shadows emerged from the ground, seeking hearts--
The moment they attacked Cindy, the Keyblade appeared in her hand and the shadows were repelled from her.
She took down every one of them.
These creatures, were not from this world.
A man in black robes stood in front of a wooden door in a cave mouth of the Ancient ruins.
This world has been connected... he said
Tied to the Darkness...
Soon to be completely eclipsed...
There is so very much to learn.. You understand so little...
A meaningless effort...
One who knows nothing can understand nothing...
The man in black robes disappeared right after that.
Cindy knew she had to keep fighting with this Keyblade in order to save Mobius.
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PostSubject: Re: Fancharacters   Tue Jul 06, 2010 9:09 am

Ah, so Eli made that pic of your character attacking the Heartless. That's cool.
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PostSubject: Re: Fancharacters   Tue Jul 06, 2010 3:06 pm

Is it a bad to to mention I'm listening to "Simple and Clean"?
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PostSubject: Re: Fancharacters   Tue Jul 06, 2010 4:10 pm

Rhys the Hedgehog wrote:
Ah, so Eli made that pic of your character attacking the Heartless. That's cool.

yeah, it's awesome xD
And I saw your character has a keyblade of some sort too :)
That's awesome :D

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Is it a bad to to mention I'm listening to "Simple and Clean"?

Not really xD
Although her themesong is "Passion"
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PostSubject: Re: Fancharacters   Tue Jul 06, 2010 8:54 pm

Miles The Yellow Fox wrote:
Rhys the Hedgehog wrote:
Ah, so Eli made that pic of your character attacking the Heartless. That's cool.

yeah, it's awesome xD
And I saw your character has a keyblade of some sort too :)
That's awesome :D

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Is it a bad to to mention I'm listening to "Simple and Clean"?

Not really xD
Although her themesong is "Passion"

Yep, it's name is Eclipse and I'm doing a story about it with my FC. Hako made the keyblade.
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PostSubject: Re: Fancharacters   Wed Jul 07, 2010 6:35 am

Damn keyblade wielders =P
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PostSubject: Re: Fancharacters   Wed Jul 07, 2010 6:45 am

GoldenHedgehog360 wrote:
Damn keyblade wielders =P

Are you gonna get one? =P
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PostSubject: Re: Fancharacters   Wed Jul 07, 2010 6:48 am

Zetsu has one called "Seraph God" with a halo over it. I really only gave it to him so he could fit in your story.
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PostSubject: Re: Fancharacters   Wed Jul 07, 2010 10:14 am

This is my Fan Character's Info.

Full Name: Star The Hedgehog
Nicknames: Star/SH
Age: 11
Strengths: Whenever I he eats, he gets stronger for unknown reasons
Weakness: Spiders and Water
Description: A Yellow hedgehog. (I'm too lazy to describe! Look at my avatar.
As seen in: Sonic house, and Summer Vacation RP
Facts: His favorite food is Apple Pie
Bios/Story: Everything about him is unknown. He woke up on the beach, not knowing anything about his past. His real name is unknown as well.
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PostSubject: Re: Fancharacters   Wed Jul 07, 2010 12:38 pm

So basically, he's got shadow syndrome?
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PostSubject: Re: Fancharacters   Wed Jul 07, 2010 9:05 pm

GoldenHedgehog360 wrote:
Zetsu has one called "Seraph God" with a halo over it. I really only gave it to him so he could fit in your story.

Okay. You'll have to show me what it looks like. Send me a PM.
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PostSubject: Re: Fancharacters   Wed Jul 07, 2010 9:46 pm

GoldenHedgehog360 wrote:
So basically, he's got shadow syndrome?
Pretty much.
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PostSubject: Re: Fancharacters   Thu Jul 08, 2010 12:38 am

Full Name: Metal Shadow
Nicknames: Metal
Age: N/A
Strengths: He gets lazers in his hands.
Weakness: losing the chaos emerald in his chest/
Description: Shadow, but metal :P. He has a chaos emerald powering him.
As seen in: WILL have been seen in Summer Vacation
Facts: He tries to kill Star a number of times.
Bios/Story: Robotnik was angry. Sonic defeated him yet again. So he ordered his robots to take a sample of a hedgehog. Shadow's DNA was the one took. Of course, it was not without the metal, so he used a sample of metal shadow's memory. It created metal shadow, who now knew sonic and shadow. Soon, he broke out of a test chamber and into the world... of course, tracking down star.
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