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PostSubject: Sceinic's NEW poetry   Sat Aug 21, 2010 6:37 pm

Alone in the snow
Though I relish the cold, It's not the best
To walk alone in the wind, with little rest.
Trudging through with no one to hold.
Even I cannot forever stand the cold.

For once in my life, I wished for heat.
Or another person, to share my defeat
The teardrops froze to my face
and I soon became rooted in place

As the storm ended, and night became dawn,
I stirred and let out a feeble yawn.
The snow had melted, and left behind...
Dew laden grass, sparkling in the cold, dawn sun.


This poem was based on an adventure of Sceinic's, the one time in her life she wished the snow would go away and it would become warmer.

Rhyme Scheme:
AA, BB, AA, BB, AA, BB, AA, BC



Friends forever
Glace

The young silvery kitsune
Jumped into the air
But sprained her knee

Sceinic came over to help
but Glace declined,
and got up herself.

She then splashed her,
and Sceinic splashed back,
It was quite a sight, I concour.

When the sun set, and the day came to end..
The two waved goodbye
and parted ways again.

Rhyme scheme: ABA, ABA, ABA, ABA


Comet

Sceinic walked with the group
With a troubled look on her face.
The time was coming,
they would have to defeat the meterax.

Comet stopped and turned around.
To face the young fox,
Face also a frown.

Sceinic tried to forget her worries
but couldn't if she tried.
So she grabbed Comet's saber,
and jumped into the trees.

Comet laughed and sped after her,
the two practically riding the breeze
(while orbit and glace wondered where they had gone)

When he finally caught up,
Comet grabbed his saber
and pushed her into the mud below.

Though the fun ended when the others caught up.
Laughing at the sight of a hedgehog covered in twigs and leaves,
and a fox covered in dirt and mud.

Rhyme Scheme: Freeverse


Orbit

Sceinic sighed.
With Glace and Comet gone,
Orbit was left by her side.

He crossed his arms and was silent
until Sceinic got her way.....
and grabbed his arm
and flung him into a bush.

Orbit growled and charged after her.
But Sceinic was too evasive.
Dodging pipes and poles
(which Orbit would keep running into)

She took a look back,
and to her surprise...
Orbit was laughing
and for once, having the time of his live.

So when Comet and Glace returned.
and asked the two what they had done.
Sceinic replied simply: Not much
and Orbit was asleep






These three poems are based on actual roleplays Sceinic and her friends had. Orbit and Glace aren't the best at roleplaying, so these where the best I could find.
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PostSubject: Re: Sceinic's NEW poetry   Sat Aug 21, 2010 8:34 pm

That's pretty good Sceinic.
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PostSubject: Re: Sceinic's NEW poetry   Sat Aug 21, 2010 8:34 pm

Thanks. I was groggy when I wrote them, though, X.x
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PostSubject: Re: Sceinic's NEW poetry   Sat Aug 21, 2010 8:40 pm

Sceinic wrote:
Thanks. I was groggy when I wrote them, though, X.x

You go through different emotions when you write something that's emotional.
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PostSubject: Re: Sceinic's NEW poetry   Sun Aug 22, 2010 4:21 am

There wasn't really a need to make this new topic. You could have just bumped the old one.
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PostSubject: Re: Sceinic's NEW poetry   Sun Aug 22, 2010 4:27 am

Kinda depends though. I was thinking of making a new art topic to get away from my crappy old art.

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PostSubject: Re: Sceinic's NEW poetry   Sun Aug 22, 2010 5:40 am

SuperLightning wrote:
Kinda depends though. I was thinking of making a new art topic to get away from my crappy old art.
^ I did that as well.
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PostSubject: Re: Sceinic's NEW poetry   Sun Aug 22, 2010 6:55 am

Well, if you guys don't mind, I could just delete your old topics.
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PostSubject: Re: Sceinic's NEW poetry   Sun Aug 22, 2010 7:00 am

I would like that, thank you. Now how do you guys like my poetry?
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PostSubject: Re: Sceinic's NEW poetry   Sun Aug 22, 2010 7:20 am

Speedy the Hedgehog wrote:
Well, if you guys don't mind, I could just delete your old topics.
Please do.
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PostSubject: Re: Sceinic's NEW poetry   Sun Aug 22, 2010 7:46 am

It's great Sceinic. You should do more.
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PostSubject: Re: Sceinic's NEW poetry   Sat Sep 04, 2010 9:47 pm

Untold Pathways

My heart is locked away,
Protected by a clouding mist.

So close, but unable to grasp.
My feelings feel so unclear.

The wrath of a friend,
now forced to by my enemy,
I miss the friendship we all shared.

But as feelings mold,
and the mist swirls less and less..

New feelings change the way I live,
and sacrifices must be made.

Though as I think,
It becomes worthwhile.

For the new way I think,
For the new way I feel.

Lately, I've been choked,
unable to speak my heart...

But this poem lets my express myself
the confusion and the lies.

A friend who has become less,
and a friend who has become more.

Though my life has become confusing,
with all it's twists and turns..

Dawn light shines on new pathways,
and warms my cold chills.
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PostSubject: Re: Sceinic's NEW poetry   Sat Sep 04, 2010 9:51 pm

Wow. Awesome Scein.
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PostSubject: Re: Sceinic's NEW poetry   Sat Sep 04, 2010 9:53 pm

Thanks. It was a short poem I made in 5 minutes.
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PostSubject: Re: Sceinic's NEW poetry   Sun Sep 05, 2010 8:33 am

POTATO SUNDAE.

There. Now post. >.>.
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PostSubject: Re: Sceinic's NEW poetry   Sun Sep 05, 2010 8:37 am

Hmmmmmm. *lightbulb*


Potato Sundae
I like my Potato Sundae,
with raw onions and cheese,
lightly salted,
and made to please.

Now this poem,
was inspired by the post above.
So if you want quality poetry..
Don't spam, cause this is what you made me think of.
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PostSubject: Re: Sceinic's NEW poetry   Sun Sep 05, 2010 8:38 am



You insult my nature of potato sundaes? I shall now commend you.

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PostSubject: Re: Sceinic's NEW poetry   Sun Sep 05, 2010 8:39 am

..... Yup. I did.
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