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PostSubject: Golden Attempts Poetry   Sat Jul 24, 2010 3:37 pm

Yeah, thought I'd try something new. Here's my first poem called "Mystic Night".

As he stands on top of a building
Gazing at the stars
The beautiful sight is drowned out
By the speeding cars
“What a rockin’ city”
“I love this place!”
Says the young Golden hedgehog
With a smile on his face
This was no ordinary night
For there was something unusual
Golden could sense this
As the sky had never been this beautiful
“This night feels mystical”
“This is a mystic night!”
Exclaims Golden
Still astonished by the sight
The stars glowed
The moon was shining bright
Golden says again
“This is a mystic night!”
As much as Golden enjoyed the sight
He couldn’t shake this feeling
As he thought to himself
“This is a night I should be sharing!”
Golden traveled on the roof tops
High and low
Inviting his friends
To enjoy the star show
After several leaps
And much running
Golden said to his friends
“Let’s get going!”
Golden and company traveled the skies
Almost in flight
Golden and friends shout
“This is a Mystic Night!”
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PostSubject: Re: Golden Attempts Poetry   Sat Jul 24, 2010 11:21 pm

I like it Ace. You should do more poetry.
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PostSubject: Re: Golden Attempts Poetry   Sun Jul 25, 2010 4:55 am

Thanks, I actually didn't like this, since it made it on the spot.
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PostSubject: Re: Golden Attempts Poetry   Sun Jul 25, 2010 8:26 am

GoldenHedgehog360 wrote:
Thanks, I actually didn't like this, since it made it on the spot.

It's worth a try.
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PostSubject: Re: Golden Attempts Poetry   Sun Jul 25, 2010 12:15 pm

Meh, I'll probably write lyrics for game songs that, you know, don't have lyrics.
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PostSubject: Re: Golden Attempts Poetry   Sun Jul 25, 2010 11:14 pm

I think it's weird how the first half rhymed and the second half didn't.
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PostSubject: Re: Golden Attempts Poetry   Mon Jul 26, 2010 4:28 am

Cool yet odd.
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